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ECHOING LOVE

A fluttering tear
Floats, so softly it descends
From my weary eye.

Raindrops mixing with
Fleeting subtle lilac scent,
I sense, wistfully.

Your whispering breath,
Like lost memories of yore,
I hear it, alone.

Satin touch, feeling
Like the sound of deep sweet blues,
I long for it now.

Sad, aching, I seek
The laughter once in our hearts,
Wishing you were here.
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:iconyingyangplz: ......... :iconmeawplz:


since I am new to the poetry game here on DA, I wasn\'t sure which category to select... but, since all five stanzas are / could be individual haikus, I took a plunge... I\'ll gladly change if asked... hope you like...


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if you :+fav: my heart jumps for joy, so this is a BIG THANK YOU, in advance, just in case...
if you don\'t, that\'s great too – still, so very glad you popped in!!!

:peace: :hug: :peace: :hug: :peace: :hug:

-here\'s what I\'ve been up to lately at my blog [link]


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~Don64738 Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Bravo!
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:iconbuddhakat9:
thank you kindly, Don...
:)
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~Don64738 Jul 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're most welcome!
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:weed::weed::peace::weed::weed::peace::weed::weed:

very nice Janet :-) Pink Floyd~ Wish you were here ~ [link]

“Nobody knows who I am or what I do. Not even I . " ~Don Juan Matus
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thank you, Mark... and for the tune, to which I am now listening... love PF
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:)
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~retransmission Jun 26, 2012   Traditional Artist
This is a very beautiful and atmospheric poetry Janet!
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:iconbuddhakat9:
thank you... I'm very happy you like it...

:)
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*SubjugatedSandwich Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Very nice poem, and your category selection is all right. The header really should be Traditional or Fixed Forms. Pretty much any poem with a specific structure in mind would be considered fixed.
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:iconbuddhakat9:
thanks for the feedback about category stuff... and I'm glad you like the piece too...

:)
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`ArtByCher Jun 26, 2012   Traditional Artist
Lovely Janet :rose:
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